I am emailing a person about possibly buying their domain name that is not in use. I need help with making the content sound professional, and well thought out. It’s fairly short, so there won’t be much editing. I’m taking general suggestions, but typing the sentences the way you think they should be will help me more. The most complete answer gets best answer. Here is the email in its current form.
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Dear John Doe,

I am inquiring as to the status of the domain name www.website.com. My company is interested in purchasing the domain if it is not currently in use. Visiting the site suggests that it is parked, pending renewal, or has expired. If you are interested, you may contact me by email or telephone. Thank you for your time. We hope to be doing business with you soon.

Sincerely,

Jim Jones
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Additional info:

My contact info is in the signature.
I’m not sure if he’s male or female, although i think “hyun” is a male name.